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    Infinity- Inspired Performance

    Script:

    When machines start driving machines we'll consider a change.

    Computers can measure performance. But computers can't feel. They don't have a pulse.

    Which is why Infiniti has a Master Driver, recognized by the Ministry of Japan for his extraordinary skill.

    His sole job is to provide engineers with human feedback.
    Emotional feedback.

    One drive in a G Sedan, Coupe, Convertible, or the new G25 Sedan, and you'll instantly feel the exhilarating difference he makes.

    This is inspired performance.

    This is the way of Infiniti.

    32 people have played this

    Practice Recording:

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    Wanted to try this 2 different ways - one normal and one in Hal 9000 mode since computers are mentioned. In acting, taking a different approach to a character or a line can sometimes yield suprising results. Thanks for listening, Dave. (not a Space Odyssey pun, its my real name)

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    Peer Feedback:

    Holy Sh-t. That was incredible!!!
    When you say that computers can't feel and don't have a pulse, that was the only place I felt it was just ever so slightly anti-climactic for me because you actually sounded like a robot, lol. I think it works everywhere else but for me, not on those two lines.

    INCREDIBLE job!!!

    Peer Feedback:

    Thanks!

    Peer Feedback:

    Vocal performance - the pacing was too slow on both takes. There is very little change in the performace. I think you missed the mark just a little on tone; tempo is too slow, the pitch range is off, the volume is off. The read sounded monotone and you came across as indifferent and robotic. You are a person speaking to me about how computers cant feel etc. I would like to hear more emotion. In my opinion, you have the voice to pull this kind of read off. Just keep at it. thank you.

    Peer Feedback:

    You did something significant with your second read: you were doing phrases,
    instead of individual words. My ear listens for phrases. I don't know if that's what
    you intended, but the first reading didn't reach me.

    Peer Feedback:

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Peer Feedback:

    +1 on the 1st read. near perfect IMHO.

    i think your read is very similar in tone, phrasing and pacing as a real Infiniti commercial with Liev Schrieber:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=18a4hE7lm_A

    Actually, pacing the whole piece isn't relevant, because this track would be chopped up to fit the visuals.
    the read isn't a story narration, and shouldn't be highly modulated. I like the flat read in this case.

    I think you were emulating a professionally produced ad, which is a good idea; and you did a very nice job.

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    Buick LaCrosse CXS del 2010 versus el Lexus ES

    Script:

    El Lexus ES del 2010 no recibió recomendaciones del IIHS, Edmunds.com, ni por el Consumers Digest, solo tiene una garantía en motor y transmisión de 70,000 millas o 6 años. No tiene Diagnóstico del Vehículo, ni tampoco desaceleración de Vehículo Robado.
    En cambio el Buick LaCrosse CXS del 2010 ha sido elegido por el IIHS como el “el mejor en cuanto a seguridad,”por Edmunds.com como 'uno de los vehículos ‘Más Recomendados’ en el 2010,' además considerado como ‘Mejor Compra’ por Consumers Digest. Tiene una garantía en motor y transmisión de 100,000 millas o 5 años, un Diagnóstico del Vehículo de OnStar por 1 año estándar, una desaceleración del Vehículo Robado también de OnStar por 1 año estándar.
    ¡Escoge sólo el mejor! El Buick LaCrosse CXS del 2010. Para mas informacion visita buick.com

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    Chevy Malibu

    Script:

    Más que un sedán, es una obra maestra de ingeniería, precisión y diseño; rodeado de detalles cromados disponibles, líneas precisas que acentúan su carrocería, y curvas que fluyen y se desvanecen en pequeños espacios para un manejo silencioso y aerodinámico. En su interior encontrarás gran atención al detalle desde asientos de dos tonos en piel, volante forrado en piel con controles integrados y hasta una luz azul ambiental, todo esto y más disponible. A su atractivo look añádele la eficiencia de un estimado EPA de 33 MPG en carretera y un increíble precio, y verás como esta obra maestra puede ser mucho más alcanzable de lo que piensas.

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    Volkswagen 2

    Script:

    En cada concesionario VOLKSWAGEN nos tomamos nuestro tiempo para explicarte lo mejor de la energía alemana, además de las 50 características estándar, los 5 años de garantía a 50,000 millas y el gran poder de reventa que tiene cada modelo.
    Tú lo mereces.
    VOLKSWAGEN. Lo que ofrecemos es real.

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