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    Arrietty

    Script:

    Discover a world beneath our own.

    Where little people have made their home.

    At night they Borrow things
    that are never missed.

    They stay out of sight
    of that they insist.

    But Brave Arrietty
    she dreams of more.

    For her the world is there to explore.

    So when a young boy sees her one day
    a friendship is born in an extraordinary way.

    Now join them on their journey
    as they both discover an amazing adventure
    that's unlike any other.

    From Studio Ghibli

    Creators of “Spirited Away”, “Howl's Moving Castle” and “Ponyo”
    comes the story of a friendship that will touch your heart.

    Where the smallest person
    plays the biggest part.

    Arrietty
    Inspired by Mary Norton's “The Borrowers”.

    Contributed by Richurd

    24 people have played this

    Practice Recording:

    Click to hear danielmarrin's recording

    Just trying out a new genre. I'd love your feedback!

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    Peer Feedback:

    Daniel, this is a challenging kind of script because rhymes dictate rhythm and inflection and the danger is that you will sound sing-song (which gets boring quickly). I'd try to deemphasize the rhyming. I also think you would benefit from some changes in mood or pace. By that I mean a shift here and there. An example would be from from urgent to contemplative or wistful.

    Given the script I think you sound engaged and entertaining. Good clear diction.
    Technical problems: obvious pops in a few spots.

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    Arrietty

    Script:

    Discover a world beneath our own.

    Where little people have made their home.

    At night they Borrow things
    that are never missed.

    They stay out of sight
    of that they insist.

    But Brave Arrietty
    she dreams of more.

    For her the world is there to explore.

    So when a young boy sees her one day
    a friendship is born in an extraordinary way.

    Now join them on their journey
    as they both discover an amazing adventure
    that's unlike any other.

    From Studio Ghibli

    Creators of “Spirited Away”, “Howl's Moving Castle” and “Ponyo”
    comes the story of a friendship that will touch your heart.

    Where the smallest person
    plays the biggest part.

    Arrietty
    Inspired by Mary Norton's “The Borrowers”.

    Contributed by Richurd

    Recordings:

    Hear and comment on a recording of this script that one of your peers recorded.

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    Batman Returns

    Script:

    Hello, Bat-Fans! It's ME! The Joker, baby! And I'm here to let you know that Batman is back! In Batman Returns, the all new animated adventures! Saturday mornings at 9, 10 central, right here on this station! And don't forget to look for me, too! It'll be tons of fun!

    Recordings:

    Hear and comment on 3 recordings of this script that your peers recorded.

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